Darkness must hide,
From light so righteous.
The fears and doubts,
Slowly fading away.
Life’s greatest mystery,
Hidden till the end.
Redemption through blood,
A promise with God.
That those who believe,
Shall rise from the dead.
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Very good, especially the way you portray the words “redemption through the blood” . But try to include one or 2 figures of speech within the poem. Its awesome!
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I very much enjoy your work this was short sweet and to the point.
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Powerful, in both its serious tone and arresting display of imagery. Echoes in the reader’s thoughts!
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